Over the holidays Kerrie and I worked on the first draft script. It's not really the first draft I guess because we've all typed up rough drafts before this one, but it's the first 'official' script with proper formating and everything!
We went through a few goes before settling with this version. We were worried that the alien was getting too aggressive and dangerous, and we want to keep this light hearted. Andi mentioned that we should research the word 'hubris'.
hu·bris
–noun
excessive pride or self-confidence; arrogance.
So that's where we decided to go with the script. Kerrie and I also introduced some new characters - the guards. We were worried about animating an explosion. It seemed too much work and we thought it might be funnier if you saw how the explosion affected the guards, in a sort of Warner Bros. inspired build up to explosion, cut away, BOOM, the guards are singed and their sunglasses are knocked off but they remain expressionless and passive.
We also wanted to make the world leaders a bit critical. We thought... if the audience can see the alien is full of himself, they'll wonder why the world leaders don't think the same?
Here is a link to the first draft:
First Draft